A frum girl on the westcoast, and writing what's on my mind.
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In life, we can either let our experiences make us bitter, or we can channel that feeling towards being a good example in order to improve things.
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Tuesday, February 06, 2007
The power of song
- At first it was just one Then it was two Then three And the numbers kept growing No words, just a tune It flew through the air Into the ears of others It was everwhere Smooth and serene And but for a moment They were lifted up To another place
Knaidel, this is probably the deepest poem I ever wrote. Didn't know I could write one so deep. :) Picture this, a few people are sitting at a table singing. Their song is heard by others and then there are more at the table singing. They get lost in song and their spirits soar
Very nice! I love reading short but powerful poems. Its an original, I hope. I'm a solid lover of music myself. No better way to express than through rhythm and harmony!
21 comments:
that's beautiful! :)
Very beautiful.
"The power of song"
Beautiful is the word!!!
i dont undestand it, maybe i am tired.
Jess, social and YB, thanks
Chaverah, that happens to me too.
It's about people singing and it lifts them to the world of song.
music can have that effect on me.
Lovely LVN! I know that music has the power to lift, cheer, make sad, put down, upset....
I have a million different songs to fit my million different moods.
so lovely. nice to see you back writing & on my blog! I do the same thing on ms.
I think this one is too deep for me... it sounds nice but I still don't quite get it even after pondering all the comments.
Prag, :)
Sara, me too
Meg, thanks
Knaidel, this is probably the deepest poem I ever wrote. Didn't know I could write one so deep. :) Picture this, a few people are sitting at a table singing. Their song is heard by others and then there are more at the table singing. They get lost in song and their spirits soar
Very nice. Yours?
nice...
i love anything about singing, so you got me hooked.
Very beautiful with such true meaning.
Have a good day.
Ah, thanks. If one, two, and three are people, this is something I can handle :)
I sense a niggun coming on.
The last two lines ring so true.
Dreamer, cool :)
Barbara, thanks
Knaidel, I love niggunim and it's easier to create because you don't need to think of words.
lvn - whaddaya mean? for me, a niggun comes with words. the niggun is half the inspiration, and the words, the other half.
How profound!
Dreamer, I guess we're thinking about two different kinds. Both are beautiful and good.
LV, thanks
Very nice! I love reading short but powerful poems. Its an original, I hope. I'm a solid lover of music myself. No better way to express than through rhythm and harmony!
Mel Balsamo
JRomances.com
Thanks, yea it's original. I enjoy a lot music too.
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